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Do you agree or disagree? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.

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It is common
believe
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to believe
 that
although
 motion pictures are
good source
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a good source
 of entertainment, reading
fiction
 books like short stories and novels are more fun to read.
This
 essay will discuss, how
fiction
 stories are far better than movies. To commence with, people can travel the new imaginary world in their minds to create the stories while reading
fiction
 books. In these books almost all the stories are related to the imaginary things, and
people when read
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when people read
 these books, they start making the pictures in their minds related to the story, which
fasinates
cause to be interested or curious
fascinates
 them to read more and get more knowledge about it. To illustrate, in India, a survey found that children who read
fiction
 books more, have more creativity level than other children who do not read these kind of stories.
Hence
, reading
fiction
 books not only increase the level of imagination in people, but
also
 make them more creative in their life.
Furthermore
,
fiction
 reading is the best way to make the
habbit
an established custom
habit
 of reading books.
Authors
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The authors
 present their ideas or stories in a creative as well
as systematic way
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as a systematic way
 that if someone starts reading these books once, it is hard to break link unless they finish
whole book
Suggestion
the whole book
a whole book
. These
books plays
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books, play
books play
 a very crucial part while making reading
habbit
an established custom
habit
habits
, not only in
children but
Accept comma addition
children, but
 people from all age groups can take advantage of it.
For instance
, nowadays, so many countries have started to adopt that idea to give their children some sort of
fiction
 books, so that they can make interest in the reading books from the early age, because they know that
habbits
any of various burrowing animals of the family Leporidae having long ears and short tails; some domesticated and raised for pets or food
rabbits
 make in
this
 age hard to die, and it will certainly
beneficial
Suggestion
benefit
 for them in the future. So, these
fiction
 books
wor
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
 like a glue between people and their reading
habbits
an established custom
habits
. To recapitulate, no doubt that motion pictures are very famous in people, but the
pleasent
affording pleasure; being in harmony with your taste or likings
pleasant
, which is provided by the
fiction
 books, is beyond the
expextations
belief about (or mental picture of) the future
expectations
.
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