Advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and examples.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Advertising is a form of publicity which a

company

Use synonyms

uses to get into the public to sell their ideas or products. The increase in the influence of it is a positive sign for the companies which symbolizes the reach of the

product

Use synonyms

to the customers targeted. Personally, I feel that, as the influence grows the market grows and so the revenue of the

company

Use synonyms

. But there are two cases that are to be dealt before concluding which will be done in the

further

Linking Words

discussion. In the

first

Linking Words

case if the

Use synonyms

is the relevance of the

Use synonyms

Suggestion

for

the

product

Use synonyms

and its use. In simpler words, the information given

Suggestion

the

Use synonyms

should not deviate from the

product

Use synonyms

they provide.

For example

Linking Words

, in a condom

Use synonyms

the intimate scenes between the lead artists is not necessary

on the contrary

Linking Words

the useful information like eradication of SDTs or preventing pregnancy should be discussed. The

second

Linking Words

and the most important aspect to be considered is the transparency of the

company

Use synonyms

In other words

Linking Words

, the

company

Use synonyms

should not advertise something that can not be achieved by using the

product

Use synonyms

(exaggerating).

For

Linking Words

example in

Accept comma addition

example, in

one of the axe deodorant advertisements, it will be shown that a

nmber

the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals

number

of women go crazy for you if you use that perfume.

This

Linking Words

type of advertisements which will exaggerate the use of the products influence people negatively. On a whole, by examining the positives and negatives of the advertisements I conclude that the relevance and transparency of it determines the trend of the

Use synonyms

that is

Linking Words

, whether it has a positive or negative trend.

Submitted by luckymicky97 on Sat Aug 24 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Insomnia
Sleep deprivation
Circadian rhythms
Productivity
Stress
Anxiety
Cognitive function
Melatonin
Sleep hygiene
Globalization
24/7 economy
Blue light
Sleep patterns
Sleep maintenance insomnia
Irregular working hours
Lifestyle factors
Emotional well-being
Health consequences
Flexible work hours
Quality of life

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that employers should not overly concern themselves with what their employees wear, as their quality of work should be the primary focus. I wholeheartedly agree with this viewpoint, and this essay will elaborate on my reasons.
7
band
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In the contemporary era, a noticeable shift in family planning has emerged and a growing number of individuals have a tendency is have their offspring at a later stage. I believe there are numerous benefits such as they can spend quality time together and preparing mentally, a financially better for their children.
4.5
band
In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts- music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, majority of people easily get famous in today's world without any talent with the help of interent and technology, whereas, those people actually having talent can not get name and fame in this world. I also agree with this statement as teenage and young people get handsome payout.
8
band
Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The growing use of digital devices in communication affects people's abilities to read and write. Some people are concerned about some negative impacts regardless of the potential benefits that they could gain from this trend. I partially agree with this, for their degrading literacy although computers and mobile phones sometimes promote their communication with frequent exchange of messages online.
4
band
The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?
Nowadays Flights for holidays, business and commercial purpose around the world has increased. those have many positive and negative impact in several aspects in the world.

Advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and examples.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts- music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?