It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Although
it is believed by some people that only individuals who are born with talents can do well in sports and
music
, others think that any child can acquire
such
skills by training. In my opinion, through practice and determination, any child can become a successful artist or sports person. It is said that to be a sports star or musician you need to be born with the expertise of it. Those children who show an interest in sport and
music
in the early years perform better than those who do not. Indeed,
talent
in sports and
music
needs dedication and only those who have an interest should pursue.
For instance
, Rafael Nadal, a sports star is considered an epitome of Lawn Tennis and is
also
known as “the King of Clay”. But
this
did not happen overnight as he had been learning to play on clay courts since his childhood. From his debut until now we have seen him win 9 Grand slam trophy of French Open, a clay court tournament without any difficulty.
Therefore
, being born with the
talent
is an important aspect to excel in any given field.
Although
, been born with certain
talent
is crucial as the individual may struggle due to lack of skills. But, an individual can be trained for any desired skill, be it sports or
music
. As per the book by “Malcolm Gladwell, Outliers: The Story of Success” we need 10,000 hours of continuous practice to develop any
talent
.
This
book provides evidence that
talent
can be developed with constant effort and will.
Also
, Robin Sharma the author of the Monk who sold his Ferrari, suggest that a habit can be developed in 21 days. These habits can cater in any form of skill sets as your brain is programmed to perform any function.
This
goes as per the saying by Aristotle a Greek philosopher, “we are what we repeatedly do. Excellence
then
is not an act, but a habit”. These examples show that habits are required to develop a
talent
for sports and musicians. In conclusion, indeed, is important for any individual to be born with certain
talent
as it will be easy to develop the expertise. But, being born with does not mean that
talent
cannot be learnt later. There are books which have been written after rigorous research which mention that
talent
can be created with the help of deliberate habits to program our brain. In my opinion, we should not only consider
talent
at birth, but the one’s developed after training.

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