Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing.To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words.

Technology innovation is
skyrockering
propels bright light high in the sky, or used to propel a lifesaving line or harpoon
skyrocketing
around the world which makes human day-to-day activities easier as compare to
past
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the past
. In the
phethora
extreme excess
plethora
of
technology
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technological
invention, the
computer
and mobile
phone
are one of the best and successful machine of innovation, where humans can perform more than one action simultaneously with less
time
consumption
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consuming
. I agree that with the help
this
gadgets the
letter
-writing, a past activity, is replaced to mail writing with more pros.
Firstly
, when the electronic components started to develop, the humans began to curious about to use those components like
computer
,
Accept space
,
mobile
phone
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
,.
For example
, the humans are
started
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starting
to use calculator in phones and computers
instead
of using
calculator
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a calculator
,
this
make to reduce the sale and
usuage
the act of using
usage
of calculator in a day-to-day activity. The people start to forget the using product and move to the new product, if it is
more comfort
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more comfortable
and easy to work.
Likewise
, the
letter
writing is
vanised
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vanishing
vanished
varnished
because of the writing in
computer
through mail and sending essential messages through cell
phone
, but
begin
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begins
to use them to know who its work, latter the features attracted the people and started to
fell
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fall
in the hands of technology.
Secondly
, the expense to write a
letter
to others is higher when compare to send a message or mail through
electronic device
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an electronic device
electronic devices
.
For instance
, each
letter
would be
send
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sent
through
post office department
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the post office department
and charges
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
be applicable to every
letter
depends upon the location it reaches. But, in electronic gadgets, only once the amount
will be spend
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will be spent
on buying the product, after that any number of writing can be
send
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sent
without any charges to anyone in the world through internet or telecommunication.
In addition
, the
time
consumption
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consuming
to send the script
information
has less
time
in
computer
or mobile
phone
, whereas the
time
usuage
the act of using
usage
is higher like two to three days to obtain the writing
information
through
letter
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letters
the letter
a letter
to the receiver. To conclude, the
letter
writing was
an
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a
useful method in ancient days to send and receive
information
.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, the technology
invention
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invented
like
computer
, mobile
phone
has made a great
changes
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change
in the world trend by adding more features and consume less
time
to collect the writing
information
.
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