Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing.To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words.

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Technology innovation is

skyrockering

propels bright light high in the sky, or used to propel a lifesaving line or harpoon

skyrocketing

around the world which makes human day-to-day activities easier as compare to

past

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the past

. In the

phethora

extreme excess

plethora

technology

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technological

invention, the

computer

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and mobile

phone

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are one of the best and successful machine of innovation, where humans can perform more than one action simultaneously with less

time

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consumption

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consuming

. I agree that with the help

this

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gadgets the

letter

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-writing, a past activity, is replaced to mail writing with more pros.

Firstly

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, when the electronic components started to develop, the humans began to curious about to use those components like

computer

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Accept space

mobile

phone

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etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

For example

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, the humans are

started

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starting

to use calculator in phones and computers

instead

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of using

calculator

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a calculator

this

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make to reduce the sale and

usuage

the act of using

usage

of calculator in a day-to-day activity. The people start to forget the using product and move to the new product, if it is

more comfort

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more comfortable

and easy to work.

Likewise

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, the

letter

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writing is

vanised

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vanishing

vanished

varnished

because of the writing in

computer

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through mail and sending essential messages through cell

phone

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, but

begin

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begins

to use them to know who its work, latter the features attracted the people and started to

fell

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fall

in the hands of technology.

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, the expense to write a

letter

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to others is higher when compare to send a message or mail through

electronic device

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an electronic device

electronic devices

For instance

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, each

letter

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would be

send

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sent

through

post office department

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the post office department

and charges

wil

the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

be applicable to every

letter

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depends upon the location it reaches. But, in electronic gadgets, only once the amount

will be spend

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will be spent

on buying the product, after that any number of writing can be

send

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sent

without any charges to anyone in the world through internet or telecommunication.

In addition

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, the

time

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consumption

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consuming

to send the script

information

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has less

time

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computer

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or mobile

phone

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, whereas the

time

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usuage

the act of using

usage

is higher like two to three days to obtain the writing

information

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through

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letter

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letters

the letter

a letter

to the receiver. To conclude, the

letter

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writing was

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useful method in ancient days to send and receive

information

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While

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

Well

, the technology

invention

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invented

computer

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, mobile

phone

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has made a great

changes

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change

in the world trend by adding more features and consume less

time

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to collect the writing

information

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

363 words

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