globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages. discuss both and give your opinion

In
this
twentieth century,
globalisation
means; when the work becomes integrated economically, socially, politically, and culturally through advancement in technology, transportation and communication.
One
of the most controversial issues today relates to
globalisation
. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view. On the
one
side of
argument
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the argument
an argument
, there are people who believe that there are myriad merits of
globalisation
. The main reason for believing
this
is that if the universe become global village, economy of
local area increase
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a local area increase
in many positive ways. Most of businesses are increasing internationally.
Moreover
, with
growth
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the growth
in
economy there
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the economy, there
the economy there
will be
dynamic increase
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a dynamic increase
in employment so that productivity will be increased. Which automatically rocket up the growth of that country. It is
also
possible to say that with
globalisation
all the dwellers become equal. There will be no discrimination.
Furthermore
, bonding between among the all nations
also
tighten.
For example
, a recent survey by
Times
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the Times
of India, when learners go all around the world for higher education there will be no
descrimination
unfair treatment of a person or group on the basis of prejudice
discrimination
between students because globally all masses are equal and have
same rights
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the same rights
. On the other side of
coin
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the coin
, nobody can deny the hazards effect of
globalisation
. With the
globalisation
, there will be cut throat competition between small businesses and multinational businesses.
Thus
small businesses may have to close down.
As a result
globalisation
may
leads
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lead
to unemployment
,
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,
and exploitation of lower and middle standard people. Coca-Cola company in India is
one
good illustration for
this
is, with
globalisation there
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globalisation, there
may have
number
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a number
of new products in the market
,
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,
and people have
plethora
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a plethora
of choices. At that moment, how long Coca-Cola company will be survived? Small scale industries will be closed. As we have seen, there are
number
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a number
of
answer
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answers
to
this
question.
on
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On
balance
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balance, however
however
, I tend to believe that
globalisation
play
increasingly role
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an increasing role
increasing role
increased role
in our
life but
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life, but
one
should have to develop in
such
manner that
one
do not play with human rights, ethics and believe.

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