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Some people say the Olympics Games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

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Despite some people say the Olympics Game are not relevant in the 21st century, it is still the most important
event
 of
this
 century because of it has the prolonged history and many experts respect the brand,
also
 it has a good policy that has been accepted around the globe. Olympics Games has the prolonged history and it having held by many countries,
hence
, an
event
 has been exists that long time ago and still being run nowadays must has spirit of international sport lovers in it.
Furthermore
, the symbols of the Olympic Games is not only about sports, but
this
also
 about the connection between the people around the
world
,
this
 could be reflected via the logo consists of circles, as well as the light that appeared at the beginning of the
event
 it is standing for the soul of an athlete that burned for the love of sports.
In addition
, many sport experts around the
world
 saw
this
event
 very important because of it has a level of national, during the
event
 a lot of national teams from many countries will gather and challenge each other with sports
such
 as; soccer, swimming, running. If a team won the prize will not only bring the country an honour, but as well as a specialist that coached the team, bring their name to the upper class in a ranking table of a
world
 class expert.
Finally
, the
event
 has been adopted around the
world
 for a very long time and it has a good policy that came to an acceptance of the countries,
hence
,
this
 is quite difficult to replace the
event
 for another
event
, because of
such
 a new international
event
 that has not been adapted is hard to maintain and operate, the cost may overweight a benefit of having the new
event
. In summary, even though the idea of a brand new international
event
 is
such
 a good idea because of it is encouraging innovation,
this
 is still not worth the efforts to adapt
such
 the new
event
 and say that the Olympic Games is not suitable for the 21st century.
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