Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People’s
opinion that
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opinion, that
individuals should conduct
study
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studies
into
history
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the history
of
family
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the family
. Some have an opposite idea, which reference people to focus on the present and future generations. As a Vietnamese person, I would give my credit
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for
both ideas and discuss as below. On the one hand, individuals should notice on
history
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the history
of ancestor and there are some reason to explain it.
Firstly
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, they would know some interesting and useful information in some cases.
Secondly
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, it satisfies the curiosity of certain people as it is one of powerful characteristic, which is like a trigger leading us to make
action
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an action
.
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,
this
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kind of knowledge
help
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helps
every person to be motivated for any challenge.
For example
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, my grandfather
usually tell
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usually tells
me about a string of hard moments that he met in wartime, and these images
reminds
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remind
how issues of mine
is
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are
tiny, which encourage to over any challenge.
On the other hand
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, people should concentrate on the present and future generations as it can be changed to be better. It implies that we are living in
present
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the present
and continue to move forward into the future, and are not able to do or change
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
in the past.
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, individuals follow the advice, which means they are mature and do have
responsibility
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a responsibility
to themselves, families and society.
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, the brain of
humans being
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a human being
human being
the human being
is limited if someone focus intensively on relatives and ancestors, which leads to ignore their current stuff
such
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as job, family, friend. In conclusion, I do confirm that both ideas have its implication, which help you overcome challenges or harsh situations. It
also
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contains no drawback.
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