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Writing Samples
Band 6

You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following: – when you want to arrive and leave – explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much they will cost – ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam, to whom it may concern, I hope you find well
on
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this
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 letter. I am writing it
for booking
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to book
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 a room. My family and I will stay at your hotel from Feb.
2rd
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 to Feb. 7th, 2025. I am wondering if I could order a room with two queen beds for us. We have four
peole
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people
 with three adults and one child. My daughter is 19 and my son is 10 years old.
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 that, we need an air
condictioner
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conditioner
, a kitchen including
microwave
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a microwave
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, coffee machine and the other
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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 for cooking a meal. We plan to stay at your hotels for five days, so we want to cook our family meals to
advoid
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avoid
homesick
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homesickness
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. Please
informe
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inform
 the total prices for renting your five-day room, and guide me on how I can deposit it. I would
be
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apply
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highly appreciate
if
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it if
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 you could
advice
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advise
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 me about leisure activities and places close to your hotel. Could you please tell me things to do and where to go?
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 could be very helpful for my family to have a nice vacation at your hotel. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nguyen Lan

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language
Avoid minor grammatical errors for a polished response.
structure
Structure your paragraphs to focus on a single idea each for clarity.
content
The response includes all requested information regarding arrival, departure, room type, cost inquiry, and activity request.
tone
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for a formal request to a hotel.
format
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used, enhancing the letter's formality.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Arrival and departure
  • Sea view
  • Family suite
  • Cost estimate
  • Activities and amenities
  • Water sports
  • Cultural sites
  • Natural attractions
  • Places of interest
  • Confirmation of booking
  • Warm regards
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