Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Clothes have become icons of nations because it differs from place to another, even

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the same country. Countries with a cultural diversity can have many types of clothes. Some folks judge others

with

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their

appearance especially

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appearance, especially

their dressings. I am of the belief that the sort of wearings

does not determine

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do not determine

the person's character. In

this

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essay, both perspectives along with my point of view will be demonstrated. On one hand, some people think that

socities

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

societies

with variable

culutres

a particular society at a particular time and place

cultures

or even religions have their

characterstics

a prominent attribute or aspect of something

characteristics

characteristic

Init

a member of a people inhabiting the Arctic (northern Canada or Greenland or Alaska or eastern Siberia); the Algonquians called them Eskimo ('eaters of raw flesh') but they call themselves the Inuit ('the people')

Inuit

other words,

tradions

an item of property that is given in part payment for a new one

trade-ins

traditions

or believes can affect their choice.

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muslims

of or relating to or supporting Islamism

Muslims

prefer to wear white

jilbab

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and females wear

hejab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

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comes from their belief or from religion, so if someone

see

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sees

a female woman wears a

hejab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

, he will make sure that she is a

muslim

of or relating to or supporting Islamism

Muslim

girl.

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this

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example shows the logic of

this

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opinion.

On the other hand

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, some traditions can interpret or get similar with their way of dressing. To illustrate, people who are not religious or

christians

a religious person who believes Jesus is the Christ and who is a member of a Christian denomination

Christians

Christian

christian

in the western countries wear the same fashion.

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, citizens of these countries wear suits and dresses so it is difficult to differentiate between them.

Thus

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this

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instance shows

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instance, shows

that it is not a criteria to know about people with their cloth. In conclusion, after

this

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essay has shown both views I believe that folks have to concentrate on person's

idology not

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ideology, not

ideology not

appearance because clothes differs, but humans still the same.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

242 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
designer labels
social status
cultural appropriation
dress codes
traditional garments
sartorial choices
symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
expression of self
global fashion industry
cultural integration

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public.Why is this happening?Do you think this an appropriate use of government money?

You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: -Who you are -The problem -What you suggest they do

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?