Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

#people #person #culture #character #choice #clothes

Clothes have become icons of nations because it differs from place to another, even

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the same country. Countries with a cultural diversity can have many types of clothes. Some folks judge others

with

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their

appearance especially

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appearance, especially

their dressings. I am of the belief that the sort of wearings

does not determine

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do not determine

the person's character. In

this

essay, both perspectives along with my point of view will be demonstrated. On one hand, some people think that

socities

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

societies

with variable

culutres

a particular society at a particular time and place

cultures

or even religions have their

characterstics

a prominent attribute or aspect of something

characteristics

characteristic

Init

a member of a people inhabiting the Arctic (northern Canada or Greenland or Alaska or eastern Siberia); the Algonquians called them Eskimo ('eaters of raw flesh') but they call themselves the Inuit ('the people')

Inuit

other words,

tradions

an item of property that is given in part payment for a new one

trade-ins

traditions

or believes can affect their choice.

For example

muslims

of or relating to or supporting Islamism

Muslims

prefer to wear white

jilbab

and females wear

hejab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

This

comes from their belief or from religion, so if someone

see

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sees

a female woman wears a

hejab

a headscarf worn by Muslim women; conceals the hair and neck and usually has a face veil that covers the face

hijab

, he will make sure that she is a

muslim

of or relating to or supporting Islamism

Muslim

girl.

Hence

this

example shows the logic of

this

opinion.

On the other hand

, some traditions can interpret or get similar with their way of dressing. To illustrate, people who are not religious or

christians

a religious person who believes Jesus is the Christ and who is a member of a Christian denomination

Christians

Christian

christian

in the western countries wear the same fashion.

For instance

, citizens of these countries wear suits and dresses so it is difficult to differentiate between them.

Thus

this

instance shows

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instance, shows

that it is not a criteria to know about people with their cloth. In conclusion, after

this

essay has shown both views I believe that folks have to concentrate on person's

idology not

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ideology, not

ideology not

appearance because clothes differs, but humans still the same.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

242 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
designer labels
social status
cultural appropriation
dress codes
traditional garments
sartorial choices
symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
expression of self
global fashion industry
cultural integration

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