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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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Learning anything new is quite interesting and it develops the sense of curiosity among people. Though some people believe that burdening children to learn additional
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 is not necessary, I feel that it is important.
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, it is a proven fact, that learning a fresh
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 improves the intellectual abilities. Inculcating the habit at a very young age, sharpens their mind and
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 enhances their learning capability. Juveniles would grab a chance to enrich their linguistic potential alongside their creative abilities.
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, an article written in Times Of India, states that innovative contemplation and logical reasoning intensifies in infants by studying unknown languages from a very young age.
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, nomadic life is gaining its popularity among public these days. With increasing opportunities across the world, individuals are fascinated about the idea of moving across the globe.
Language
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 restriction would never be a barrier for children, provided they learn foreign languages as a child.
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, Indians have an edge over Chinese to grab opportunities in the field of software in the United States because of common
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. Though, it might become a burden sometimes for children to absorb an alien tongue, it is often beneficial considering that it enhances the smartness and
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 provides ample chances for growth. So I would like to recommend to teach new dialect to children as it increases their skills and
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 allows them to pursue the career they wish for, without a
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 thought of the
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 barrier.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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