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In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What are the reasons for this and how can it be solved?

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Now a
days
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day
 the population of
world
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the world
 is about 7 billion and
its
it is
it's
 continuing to grow rapidly, due to which many problems are arising. Issues like over population in some
countries while
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countries, while
health
 problems in other countries are major concerns. The
health
 system of the world is
continously
seemingly without interruption
continually
continuously
 changing with the advent of
time but
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time, but
 the habits of people are posing a risk towards their own heath with
unhealthy lifestyle
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unhealthy lifestyles
an unhealthy lifestyle
. People are leading a very healthy life due to the modern medical
techniques but
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techniques, but
 they are lacking the means to stay healthy due to their own efforts.Many illnesses are eradicated with the passage of
time but
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time, but
 many illnesses relating to unhealthy
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
 have not been overcome because many people blame the medical professionals for their unhealthy
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 and are more likely to listen to a fitness guide
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 to a professional medical
practioner
someone who practices a learned profession
practitioner
. People
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
also
 do not have enough
time
 for themselves as they are chasing after their
dreams whether
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dreams, whether
 it be of
accuring
the act of acquiring something
acquiring
 money or status for which
their
in or at that place
there
 are
neglectig
leave undone or leave out
neglecting
 their personal
health
 needs. Consider that if a person is ill and
employeed he
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employee, he
employee he
employees he
 or she might be at work rather than in bed resting because the
employeer
a person or firm that employs workers
employer
employee
employers
 will most likely terminate them rather than giving them
time
 to recover from illness
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
. It is
also
 due to the peace of the society that everyone in
this
 world is in
hurry
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a hurry
 and the rise of the fast food
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
 is providing them a chance to eat
a
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an
 instant meal, which is making people lack the skills to cook and eat healthy. The problems with the unhealthy lifestyles of people can
solved
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solve
 by making changes toward their own habits
accordingly
.The person can adopt
more healthy lifestyle
Suggestion
a healthier lifestyle
healthier lifestyle
healthier lifestyles
 by adding exercise into their daily routine and should stick towards the home cook meals. Awarness should be made public to people that the healthy lifestyle may not only improve their daily
health
 but
also
 can improve their financial status by reducing their treatment cost as well as making them go to work as per their schedule due to less illness
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