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What are the positive effects of a good transportation network

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Transportation is the
movement
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 of people, animals and goods from one place to the other. The effectiveness and efficiency of transportation
can not
can not
cannot
 be over emphasized as it has both positive and negative impacts on the economy of any nation.
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dive
turn up, loosen, or remove earth
delve
 into the positive effects of a robust
transaportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
network
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.
Firstly
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, a good
transport
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network
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 could determine the ease of doing business in a particular location. Investors all over the world consider how easy it is
to do
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doing
 business before investing in any country. One of the indices for measuring the ease of doing business is the available
transport
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network
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. Investors want to have reasonable assurance regarding the possibility of free flowing
movement
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 of its employees as well as goods and services, around the cities and
accross
to the opposite side
across
 locations either via
road
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, rail, water and air.
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 to the above, a good
transport
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network
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 helps to reduce the start up
cost
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 of a company. The availability of rail lines and good
road
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networks translate
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networks, translate
 into the company channeling the available working capital into for other things as the need to acquire staff buses will not arise. The multiplier effect of
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 is that the employee
cost
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 of hiring a driver, fuel
cost
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 and maintenance
cost
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 will be eliminated.
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, these
cost
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 savings will be channelled into other
acquring
the act of acquiring something
acquiring
 other assets.
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, the company will make more profits and
this
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 will result
into
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in
 more tax for the government.
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, the effectiveness of
transportation
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the transportation network
network
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 involves putting alternative means of
movement
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 in place to avoid dependence on a single system.
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 implies that
road
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, rail, water and air
transport
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 will be made available and affordable for the
movement
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 of people, services and goods.
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, the stress of traffic jams and frequency of sick leaves arising from
traffic menace
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the traffic menace
 will be reduced to the minimum.
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 the wastage of man hours arising from
road
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conjestions
excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
 will be largely removed. In conclusion, good
transport
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 networks do not only help improve the lives of individuals and corporations but in general, translates into increased foreign direct investment for the country.
it
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It
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 helps to provide more funds for the government
inform
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in the form
in form
 of revenues and taxation.
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