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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
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In my opinion,
this
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 is not an easy job to get admission in educational institutes
in
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at
 the ongoing time.
Not
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Note
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particular but
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particular, but
 it is almost the same for the higher and lower class public. I can admit to supporting
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 consent on a very high level. While I was intending to join the bachelor’s degree program after my twelfth grade so, I found multiple
issues including
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issues, including
 choosing the right
course because
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course, because
, as some universities have the program but don’t have the transparency in fee structure or other universities has all the required information available but, they are trying to get the required faculty in place. Sometimes, the students are facing problems with the administration department of the institutes. I
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 heard that some good universities don’t provide transport facilities and location to their campuses are inaccessible to reach without it. I read in the newspapers about the private universities which have very huge fee structures which
can’t
can not
cannot
 be afforded by any means even for the students who have received sky scraping grades. Most famous universities are
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 not providing clear details through which it would be easier for the students to opt for the most beneficial field or course. In summary, there are a lot of issues while start choosing the university until getting the admission’s formal procedures completed. I would recommend here either, to make a transparent process for the admissions for the students or depute any
councilor
someone who gives advice about problems
counsellor
councillor
councillors
 who can help and support the students through which, students don’t find any problems while choosing the university.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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