Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some say that it is more beneficial to educate boys and girls in separate
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others believe that raising them in a co-education environment is better.
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the former might help them to stay away from distractions, I believe it is more crucial to raise them in mixed
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because it helps in
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development and prepares them for the real
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. On the one hand,
gender
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-specific
schools
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can ensure that a child's academics are unhindered to a certain extent. Growing up, the body goes through a lot of hormonal changes, and it is very natural to feel attracted to the opposite
gender
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may be a lot to handle for a child leading to a shift in focus from their goals and impacting their careers eventually.
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, surveys say that men who grew up in an all-boys school
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stayed away from any kind of romantic distraction until their 20s.
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, I believe that
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restricts their comprehensive growth resulting in a failure to thrive in the real
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, mixed
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allow children to understand the perspectives and emotions of the other
gender
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. These children, when they go on to study at universities are able to interact way easily and comfortably which is a barrier for the ones that have stayed in
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-specific
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. Success in the real
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is dependent heavily on interpersonal and communication skills which come naturally to ones who have grown around the other
gender
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, most men pursuing their undergraduate at IITs ( Indian Institute of Technology), felt a higher degree of loneliness and a sense of exclusion as they spent their lives studying only around men and had no confidence or skill to interact with the other
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proves that even exceptionally brilliant minds can struggle in the real
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if mixed
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are not promoted.
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,
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, sending males and females to segregated
schools
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would bring focused attention to academics, I believe it is way more beneficial to send them to the same
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in order to foster personality and achieve things in the real
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Expand on the counterargument slightly more to provide a well-rounded discussion before giving a clear rebuttal, strengthening your position.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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