Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. • You should write at least 80 words. • Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.

#information #officer #tape #office #preparation #certificate #background #course #minutes

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like some information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. If possible I would like to

enroll

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this

course as a part-time student in 1992. I left school eight years ago after completing the 1ISC. Since

then

I have worked as a sales assistant in both Grace Bros and David Jones. From the beginning of

this

year

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I have been in charge of the Children's Wear Department in Grace Bros, Lily field.

However

, in order to advance any

further

in my career into a managerial position, I will need to do some

further

study,

such

as a Marketing or Business Course. Because I have not studied for many years, I believe that I should complete the TPC before enrolling in a Business course. Could you please send me the information as soon as possible, and tell me the dates for enrolling in the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Yours faithfully.

Mon Aug 26 2019

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thirdly
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for example
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although
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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