Write a letter to your frind thanking her/ him for the birthday gift.
Dear Melih,
I am writing to thank you for the birthday present that brought back childhood memories for me. I must express my gratitude for your generosity, as the present is handmade.
Consequently
, it is exceptionally unique for me to receive such
an incredible toy.
Furthermore
, you are aware of my favourite cartoon character, which you skillfully drew on the toy. I have never received such
an emotional gift before, making it significant for me to explain my feelings in detail. Also
, my daughter would like a similar gift, but with different drawings such
as Barbie.
Over the past ten years, you have sent me numerous creative gifts, but this
one stands out as the best. To ensure the toy's protection, you added additional bubbles to the box. Thank you very much for remembering my birthday.
If there is an opportunity to meet somewhere near the Samsun port, I would be grateful. Please do not hesitate to call me.
Take care of yourself.
Kind regards,
Salih Zeki KöniSubmitted by salihzekikoni on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a clear main idea and avoid mixing multiple ideas in a single paragraph for enhanced coherence.
task achievement
While the task response is generally complete, expanding on the emotional impact of the gift and how it represents the friendship could enhance the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite