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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?

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It is a matter of individual choice to study a course. It has been observed that in many nations, a
number
 of individuals choosing
science
 have been limited.
This
 essay will outline a
number
 of reasons behind
this
 situation and a
number
 of effects
this
 would have on the society. There are various reasons why students do not prefer to choose
science
. One of the main reasons is that
science
 is a much harder course. The students are more interested in taking subjects which are comparatively easier.
Science
 in comparison to the other course, requires more studying.
In addition
, once a student takes up
science
, he needs to invest
number
 of years studying before getting a job. To illustrate, in order to become a doctor, one needs to study for many years.
Also
 during their years of internship they are not paid as much. There are various adverse effects
this
 can have on the society. To start with, if there are few pupils taking up
science
this
 could adversely impact the economy. As an economy to grow it is vital to have scientists innovating new medicines, doctors who can cure diseases and engineers who can develop new machines.
In addition
, if few students take up
science
this
 will lead to more people taking up other professionals. It can lead to creating abundance of people for the same job. To conclude,
science
 plays a vital role in the growth of the country. It is important that pupils should positively choose
science
 which can help in the development of the economy.
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