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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I totally agree that higher tax should be imposed on fast
food
inorder
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in order
 to reduce is
comsuption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
conception
, if
this
 is done, it will
further
 assist in decreasing the number of people suffering from
health probelm
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health problems
health problem
a health problem
as a result
 of consuming fast
food
. There are so many
advantage
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advantages
 of not eating fast
food
 which I am going to discuss in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, let us analysis why eating fast
food
cause
health
 problem in some countries and the quick method that government can take to help reduce
peoples
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peoples'
people's
 consumption. The method and processes of preparing and preserving fast
food
is
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are
 one of the major
cause
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causes
 of
health
 problem. In some countries as stated, there are no regulating bodies that ensure that
food
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 sold to people are properly prepared and preserved. Often time, the fast
food
 that people purchase are preserved with some chemicals that are dangerous to human
health
. There as been observations
from
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of
 researchers that microwaving
food
 can
cause
health
 problem which some of it is cancer.
Secondly
, eating
fastfood
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fast food
 that has been preserved will often wash away many of the
nutrient
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nutrients
 in the
food
that is
suppose
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supposed
 to give nutrient to be body and fight any unwanted diseases in the body. In some countries we have read about how some
food
 outlet that was not
licienced
given official approval to act
licensed
 prepared fast
food
 for people to eat and eventually result to help
issue
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the issue
.
Moreover
, there is so much advantages related to cooking at home rather than buying fast
food
 which will eventually
cause
health
 issue. The benefit of cooking at home can not be overemphasis as it will be
cook
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cooked
 with natural ingredient and will be properly monitored
Although
 it might be hard for the government to make
this
 decision of creasing the tax on
fastfood but
Accept comma addition
fast food, but
fast food but
 it will be a welcome development as it will safe any life and
also
 help to
safe
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
 the resources that will be
spend
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spent
 on drugs. ' In conclusion, I agree that the government should place a higher task on
fastfood
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fast food
 to help reduce the challenges of
health
 issue faced by the masses. Thank you

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