𝕄𝕒𝕟𝕪 𝕞𝕠𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕡𝕖𝕠𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕒 𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕥 𝕕𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕒 𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕣 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕦𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕤𝕔𝕣𝕖𝕖𝕟. 𝕋𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕖𝕩𝕥𝕣𝕖𝕞𝕖𝕝𝕪 𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕞𝕗𝕦𝕝 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕕𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥. 𝕋𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕖𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕝𝕕 𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕚𝕔𝕥𝕝𝕪 𝕝𝕚𝕞𝕚𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕨𝕒𝕪. 𝕋𝕠 𝕨𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕖𝕩𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕕𝕠 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕖 𝕠𝕣 𝕕𝕚𝕤𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕖?

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𝕀𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕠𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕖𝕣𝕒, 𝕙𝕦𝕘𝕖 𝕟𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕖𝕣 𝕠𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕘𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕖𝕔𝕙𝕟𝕠𝕝𝕠𝕘𝕪. 𝕊𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕡𝕖𝕠𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕓𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕖𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕛𝕦𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕤 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕨𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕖 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕓𝕪 𝕨𝕒𝕥𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕣 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕦𝕥𝕖𝕣. 𝕊𝕠, 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕥𝕪𝕡𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕕𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕙𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕪𝕝𝕪 𝕔𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕔𝕒𝕝 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕖𝕕𝕦𝕔𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟. ℍ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣, 𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕠𝕡𝕚𝕟𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥, 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕦𝕤𝕒𝕘𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕔𝕥𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕚𝕔 𝕘𝕒𝕕𝕘𝕖𝕥𝕤 𝕞𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕓𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕕𝕦𝕔𝕖𝕕 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕒𝕝 𝕔𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕨𝕒𝕣𝕕𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟. 𝕀 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕝𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕪 𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕖 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕓𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕚 𝕒𝕞 𝕘𝕠𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕠 𝕘𝕚𝕧𝕖 𝕧𝕒𝕝𝕦𝕒𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕠𝕟𝕤 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕗𝕠𝕝𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕒𝕡𝕙𝕤 𝕓𝕖𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕠𝕟𝕒𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕤𝕦𝕞 𝕦𝕡. 𝕋𝕠 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕔𝕖 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙, 𝕟𝕠𝕨𝕒𝕕𝕒𝕪𝕤, 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕘 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕞𝕠𝕤𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕓𝕪 𝕨𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕓𝕪 𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕝𝕒𝕡𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕞𝕠𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕖. 𝔸𝕤 𝕒 𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕤𝕢𝕦𝕖𝕟𝕔𝕖, 𝕓𝕣𝕒𝕚𝕟 𝕗𝕚𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕕 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕦𝕟𝕦𝕤𝕒𝕘𝕖 𝕞𝕒𝕥𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕤, 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕕𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕞𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕥 𝕟𝕠𝕥 𝕓𝕖 𝕘𝕒𝕚𝕟𝕖𝕕. 𝕀𝕟𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕒𝕕, 𝕙𝕖𝕒𝕝𝕥𝕙 𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕦𝕖𝕤 𝕖𝕟𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕔𝕖 , 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕖𝕪𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕥, 𝕡𝕣𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕦𝕣𝕖, 𝕖𝕥𝕔. 𝔽𝕠𝕣 𝕖𝕩𝕒𝕞𝕡𝕝𝕖, 𝕒 𝕤𝕥𝕦𝕕𝕪 𝕡𝕣𝕠𝕧𝕖𝕕 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕚𝕟𝕕𝕚𝕒, 85% 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕖𝕖𝕟𝕤 𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕖 𝕖𝕗𝕗𝕖𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕕 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕖𝕪𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕥 𝕒𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕒𝕘𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕖𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕥. 𝕊𝕠, 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕪 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕨𝕖𝕒𝕣 𝕡𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕖𝕕 𝕘𝕝𝕒𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕘𝕙𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕝𝕚𝕗𝕖. ℍ𝕖𝕟𝕔𝕖, 𝕓𝕖𝕔𝕒𝕞𝕖 𝕓𝕒𝕟𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕖𝕖𝕟𝕒𝕘𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕦𝕡𝕥𝕠 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕖𝕩𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕥. 𝕆𝕟 𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕤𝕥, 𝕗𝕚𝕣𝕤𝕥𝕝𝕪, 𝕚 𝕓𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕖𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥, 𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟𝕤 𝕠𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕘𝕠𝕟𝕔𝕖𝕤 𝕞𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕓𝕖 𝕞𝕠𝕟𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕖𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕙𝕖𝕟𝕔𝕖 𝕚𝕥 𝕚𝕤 𝕣𝕖𝕤𝕡𝕠𝕟𝕤𝕚𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 𝕚𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤. 𝕋𝕙𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕠𝕟𝕤 𝕓𝕖𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕕𝕖 𝕚𝕥 , 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕠𝕗𝕗𝕤𝕡𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕗𝕤 𝕕𝕠 𝕟𝕠𝕥 𝕜𝕟𝕠𝕨𝕟 𝕒𝕓𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕣𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕥 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕨𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕘𝕤 𝕚𝕟 𝕒𝕟𝕪 𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕦𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟; 𝕙𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣, 𝕨𝕖 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕧𝕒𝕤𝕥 𝕧𝕒𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕥𝕪 𝕠𝕗 𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕤 𝕚𝕟 𝕚𝕟𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕨𝕙𝕚𝕔𝕙 𝕞𝕒𝕪 𝕤𝕡𝕠𝕚𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟. 𝕋𝕠 𝕚𝕝𝕝𝕦𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕥𝕖, 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕖𝕓𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕤 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕡𝕠𝕣𝕟𝕠𝕘𝕣𝕒𝕡𝕙𝕪 𝕔𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕨𝕤 𝕒 𝕞𝕒𝕛𝕠𝕣 𝕚𝕞𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕥 𝕠𝕟 𝕓𝕠𝕥𝕙 𝕤𝕖𝕩𝕖𝕤. 𝕊𝕖𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕕𝕝𝕪, 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤 𝕔𝕒𝕟 𝕣𝕖𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕚𝕔𝕥 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕤 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕒𝕕𝕕𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕞𝕠𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕖. 𝕀𝕟 𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕔𝕝𝕦𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟, 𝕖𝕟𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕔𝕖𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕖𝕔𝕙𝕟𝕠𝕝𝕠𝕘𝕪 𝕘𝕖𝕥 𝕒 𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕝𝕖 𝕚𝕞𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕥 𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕗𝕗𝕤𝕡𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤, 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕒𝕪 𝕝𝕚𝕞𝕚𝕥 𝕧𝕚𝕒 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕒𝕝 𝕔𝕒𝕣𝕓𝕚𝕟𝕘. ℍ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣, 𝕚𝕗 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤 𝕥𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝕒 𝕡𝕠𝕤𝕤𝕚𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕡𝕣𝕖𝕔𝕒𝕦𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕟 𝕠𝕟𝕝𝕪 𝕚𝕥 𝕚𝕤 𝕡𝕠𝕤𝕤𝕚𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕣𝕖𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕚𝕔𝕥 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕝𝕚𝕞𝕚𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕨𝕒𝕥𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Other say Olympic is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

The paragraph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six -month period in 2011.

While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals, others believe that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion? prison = dangrous, and consequence Rehabilitation = fix, mental problems