Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take
Dear Mr Mike
I hope you are doing well. I have received your letter and realized that you have got upset and fairly furious about the noise pollution that, unfortunately ,my home was its source. So, I decided to write a letter to you to explain the situation and
also
, apologise.
Actually, my cupboards need to be repaired since they are too old and faded. I consulted with an expert carpenter and he promised me to change it in just one day without any hindering
and trouble for my neighbours. Replace the word
hindrance
However
, when he came to my flat, he said the apartment is very old and many actions should be taken to change the cupboards without any damage to the wall. He brought his instruments and they produced a lot of noise. This
lasted about three days.
I am wholeheartedly sorry about this
situation. If I had known this
matter, I would not have been starting. at all. Many neighbours complained about it and I felt ashamed. I have written this
letter to ask you please accept my apology.
I do believe that I must compensate this
terrible situation for you. I thought a lot and in the end, I decided to invite you to my home for dinner on Saturday night. I bought a gift to see you satisfied and happy. I would be grateful if you accepted my invitation. I am looking forward to your answer.
Sincerely
JSubmitted by Maral.qanbarii1992 on
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task achievement
The letter clearly explains the noise issue, provides a sincere apology, and describes the action taken to resolve the issue. However, detailing what was done after realizing the prolonged noise could add more depth.
coherence cohesion
The structure is clear, with a logical flow of ideas. However, some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing can be improved for a smoother reading experience.
task achievement
The letter addresses all required points: reason for the noise, apology, and the actions taken.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and sincere, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous.