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These days, it seems an increasing number of people are concerned about
immigration
. People want to go to the other countries in
hope
Suggestion
the hope
hopes
of a better future. According to data from the International Organization for Migration (IOM), nearly 100.000 Vietnamese people
immigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
every year. In
this
essay, we will discuss some causes and negative effects of
immigration
in the native
country
. There are two main reasons why more people wish to migrate.
First
, there may be high unemployment in their native
country
. Without a job, people will not have enough income to cover the necessities of life.
Therefore
, they immigrate to a new
country
to seek a job.
Second
, education system in their native
country
may be inadequate or inaccessible. In Vietnam,
for example
, most parents do not want their children to study here because they believe the education environment is not good and lack of practical application.
Immigration
can have some detrimental impacts on the home
country
.
First
, the
country
may lose talented people who could
otherwise
contribute their knowledge and skills to the development of the
country
. Professor Ngo Bao Chau,
for instance
, is one of the most famous mathematicians in Vietnam.
However
, he has been living and working in France for a long time because his salary in Vietnam was insufficient.
Furthermore
, if the brain drain continues, it could adversely affect the
country
’s economy long term. To summarize, joblessness and a poor education system are two primary causes of
immigration
. Governments should be aware of the long-term, detrimental impacts of
emigration
migration into a place (especially migration to a country of which you are not a native in order to settle there)
immigration
. In my opinion,
however
,
immigration
also
may bring beneficial effects to the native
country
.
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