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Nowadays,courses and general study online are getting very popular. However, some people still prefer attending classes in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is widely held that studying online is becoming increasingly common. Some individuals still opt for the traditional
classroom
-based learning.
This
 essay will examine reasons for both views and
then
 give a concrete conclusion.    To start with, a section of the society opine that online learning has made
education
 accessible to all. The reason is because one can now have access to distance learning
any where
at or in or to any place
anywhere
 in the world and bag a degree or certificate of some sort. According to a recent survey in the US on online study, it was found that more Americans now have at least a
diploma compared
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diploma, compared
 to the past when what was
obtainable was the
Suggestion
obtainable, was the
 highly expensive non flexible
classroom
 based
education
.    
On the other hand
, some people are still dogmatic on
classroom
 learning. They believe that
education
 is not only about amassing
degrees but
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degrees, but
also
 about
core values
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the core values
 of life which online study
can not
can not
cannot
 provide.
Also
, they claim that
classroom
 learning provides social interactions among
students which
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students, which
 distance learning would not have offered. A good example illustrating
this
 is the study conducted by the ministry of
education
 in 2015, which showed that individuals most especially those born in the late forties and early nineties opted for the continuation of traditional 
classroom
 based learning.    In conclusion,
although
 both modes of
education
is
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are
 beneficial, each has its own merits and demerits.
However
, I personally prefer
classroom
 learning because it offers social interactions among students from different backgrounds as well as teaches core values of life
.
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.

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