In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, in various nations, a great number of young people become obese and their parents care much about their weight condition.

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essay will present two causes of obesity, which are eating junk

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and lack of sport activities, and

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suggest some solutions for

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problem. Thanks to the development of science and technology, people don’t have to worry about deficient foods, whereas they concern about increasing of overweight kids. The

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cause is having too much junk

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as fast

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and soft drink, which contain a considerable amount of fat and sugar.

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, children become too fat and easily have heart diseases when they get older. Another cause is that young people spend too much time on computers or phones

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of sports. The regimen is full of nutrition and children do not do exercises, energy can`t be burned and it transforms to grease in kids’ bodies.

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, as consequence of fast

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industry, over seventy percentages of children in

United States

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the United States

are obese and they must join decreasing weight programs with the guidance of doctors. To solve

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problem, there are some positive solutions that, people must do drastically.

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, it is necessary to enhance people’s awareness about

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the danger

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of obesity. Once understanding clearly, people will have enough motivation to do following solutions.

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, parents pay more attention to what their kids eat every day and try to use healthy

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in daily meals.

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, children are obligated to join some

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clubs and the kids who gain good achievements should be rewarded properly. A good example is the action of schools in Japan. They design healthy meals for students not only in

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school, but

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at home, parents just follow the guidance.

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, every student must participate at least one

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sports

club and get points like other subjects. In conclusion, because of unhealthy lifestyle with too much fast

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and lack of sports activities, children easily get obese, but some effective solutions

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parents and society can help them to reduce it. It is predicted that more and more countries will be forced to pay more attention to solve

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concern.