relevance of quality health facilities. what are your views? discuss both views

There is a popular saying that
health
is wealth. While some people may argue that good
health
care
do not guarantee healthy
living
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liveness
, I am of the opinion that the quality of available treatment and
diognostic
concerned with diagnosis; used for furthering diagnosis
diagnostic
diagnostics
strategies contribute
tremendiously
extremely
tremendously
to the well being of the populace.
This
essay will discuss both views. My reasons are not far fetched.
Firstly
, medical facilities
are put
Suggestion
put
is put
has put
puts
in place to provide the required
care
in the times of need.
For example
, about 30 percent of rural women in Nigeria die during childbirth
as a result
of non availability of facilities which should have ensured regular antenatal and postnatal
care
.
Similarly
, there is a 27 percent death rate arising from road accidents in Nigeria
as a result
of non availability of paramedics in most of the cities in the country.
In addition
, properly equipped diagnostic laboratories help with an understanding of the
health
condition of patients before the illness gets to advanced stages where it becomes difficult to curtail.
For instance
, 20 percent mortality rate for cancer patients in Malawi is attributable to late detection.
Conversely
, some folks are of the view that no matter how
good
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well
hospitals are, human beings are destined to die.
This
spans from religious believes that death is compulsory for all mortals. An example is the fact that even the doctors who give
care
to patients
also
die eventually. In summary, adequate and proper
health
care
enhances the quality of lives. It helps to reveal the status of patients in good time.
Thus
providing the
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
for swift response and referrals to facilities with experienced personnels with professional expertise.
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