These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

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era, mobile phone has become

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a crucial device

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belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive

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pros and cons. In the

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closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree

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way mobile phone has it too. I do believe that

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new technology have overcome the

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a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces

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to some extent but not fully. To support my

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react verbally

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explaination

a statement that makes something comprehensible by describing the relevant structure or operation or circumstances etc.

explanation

explanations

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achievement have

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a myriad

myriad

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advatagee

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

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first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

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of all

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it will connect people who are far away from each other by means video calling or

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Facetime

excetera

more than is needed, desired, or required

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which people can make only by having

internet connection

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an internet connection

and supportive

cellphone

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cell phone

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for an instance my family lives in

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the USA

and I am studying in

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a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada

Canada

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each other

almost whole week.

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internet and mobile phone companies gain more profits.

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, people can make more friends on social media who share common interest so, one can never

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undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind

feel

alone in

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busy world.

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, people have to be more

carefull

exercising caution or showing care or attention

careful

carefully

because both

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technologies

have some disadvantages. The prime demerit is that none of the one gives a proper privacy setting.

Pravacy

the quality of being secluded from the presence or view of others

Privacy

is the most important in the means of technology. There are

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increasing

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increases

in numbers of cyber crime

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indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise

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friends

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he cheated her.

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mobile and internet usage has been increasing day by

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day, but

we

can not

can not

cannot

overlook the

disadvatage

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantage

of using

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developmental device.