In modern society, some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

The rapid progression in

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the Internet

has paved the way for the growing popularity of distance learning. People are now speculating on the possibility of the Internet taking the place of a traditional

school

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. In my opinion, given the continued advance in technology, Internet-based learning can serve as

alternative

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an alternative

to traditional class based learning. Online

education

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has

large number

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a large number

of advantages. It

is allows

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allows

students to set their own study time. Unlike, traditional learning online courses offer children greater flexibility and enable them to create a time table in line with their need and

characterstics

a prominent attribute or aspect of something

characteristics

characteristic

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The student

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save

tution

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)

tuition

fees because a virtual

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normally charge the students much less than a conventional

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does. It is particularly a great opinion

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of

those students with

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physical

handicaps, who have great difficulties is to commuting to

shcool

an educational institution

school

campus. For those who live away from the

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, online

education

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is remarkably favourable. It can be accepted that Internet likely to be

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replaced

physical

school

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as an

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provider in the near future. If its drawbacks are removed. The

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drawback of virtual

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is

lack

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the lack

of human contact, as opposed to noted merit of traditional teacher led

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education providing

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education, providing

students with ongoing daily interactions with teachers,

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weakness can be solved by taking advantages of band with network

teachnologies

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

. The interaction between students can be

guranted

acknowledged as a supposition

granted

guaranteed

when one can contact with another, whenever and wherever he or she likes via emails, post comments on

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message boards

a message board

and chat rooms or even video conference for communication. The educator

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concerned that online learning can not make all skill and knowledge transferable for

exmaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

, some courses require a high production of hands on practice, which is beyond the capacity of online training.

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problem can be

neverthless

despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)

nevertheless

addressed by introducing multimedia as teaching aid

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By using audio and video students can sample different learning styles and

aquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

both general and

specilalised

developed or designed for a special activity or function

specialized

specialised

specialist

knowlege

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

of

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the subject

a subject

. As suggested above, there are plenty of benefits of online

learning including

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learning, including

flexibilities, cost saving and convenience

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, it has two problems, lack of interaction and tailing to provide

wide range

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a wide range

of courses.Both can be overcome as the technology advances.