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some people think that secondary or high school student should be taught how to use money management as it is an important life skill. do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#people #school #student #money #management #life #skill
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It is thought by some people that
money
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management
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 is a crucial
life
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 skill for everybody, including children and as
such
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, it should be taught in secondary schools. I agree with
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 statement as havin
g knowledge of
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will knowledge of money management skills help
has knowledge of money management skills helped
was knowledge of money management skills helping
having knowledge of money management skills help
money
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management
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 skills help the students prepare for a better financial future.
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, teaching
money
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management
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 in schools help the students appreciate the
value
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 of
money
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. Many children, especially the rich ones, who tend to have excess
money
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 do not learn to appreciate the
value
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 of
money
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.
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, if
money
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management
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 is incorporated into the school's curriculum, they would be able to understand and appreciate the
value
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 of
money
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.
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 would
also
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 teach them to cultivate the habit of saving, which would come in handy in the future.
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, as children mature and start living on their own, they need to be financially literate. A person without knowledge of
money
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management
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 can run into debts as they would not be able to manage their expenses which can lead them to borrow from other people without a payback plan. By doing so, putting themselves and probably their family in debts.
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, a person that lacks
money
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management
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 skills can run into debts and in an attempt to borrow
money
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, he or she can use his or her family property as a collateral. In a case where he or she is unable to payba
ck, the
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pay back
 property would be taken from the person or the family.
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,
money
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management
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 skill been
taug
the state or fact of existing
being
ht in class can help the student have bette
r understanding of a
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a better understanding
rithmetic. Some children find it difficult to understand calcu
lations but with
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calculations, but
 the infusion of
life
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 scenarios, it can become relat
able and
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easie
r to u
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easy
nderstand. In conclusion,
money
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management
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 is thought by some people to be an important
life
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 skill which should be taught in schools. I agree with
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 view as it help
the
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helps
students appreciate the
value
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 of
money
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, have a debt-free
life
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 and
also
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 help the students understand arithmetic.
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