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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Before the advent of the internet
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telephone or telegraph
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hand-written notes were the essential means of exchanging information despite their time-consuming nature.After the revolutionary invention of the internet
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technological advancements have evolved in
such
 a way in the
last
 few decades that communication between two individuals has become
more speedy
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speedier
 and more convenient on any given area at any time
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as a result
 of which written drafts have become quite obsolete.I strongly opine
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however
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that letter writing holds a special place in our history and in our heart and it is something that should not be completely vanished from our lives. To embark on
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it is indubitable that modern gadgets have allowed people to connect with friends or families in
this
 globalized world with a snap - a cellular phone or computer and an internet connection
is
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are
 all it takes.To elucidate
further
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people have accustomed to the fast-paced and cost-effective communicative media in
such
 a way that the tradition of writing postcards to loved ones
have diminished
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has diminished
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On the contrary
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although
 we have inclined ourselves to alternate means
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humankind has had to rely crucially on writing drafts since the ancient times and as a matter of fact majority of knowledge passed by our ancestors is still stored in letters forms.
Also
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elderly people still have affection for letters as they believe hand-written texting has a heart warming essence that no modern texting can provide.
Moreover
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written drafts are used for formal and official declarations and invitations till date. To conclude
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 reiterate my statement that written letters are not yet outdated even though latest civilization has habituated to the concept of intellectual communication.
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