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In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said “it is a big step for mankind”. But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Almost every day we read something in the papers about the latest exciting developments in the
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 race. Many people are of the view that all the money and energy spent on
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 exploration and
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 is a complete waste because it has no effect on our daily life. I,
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however, disagree
. In the following paragraphs I shall discuss how
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 has touched our lives in more ways than one. The technology that put men on the moon, launched
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 shuttles and will build a
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 station has found its way into everyday life on earth. Common secondary uses of
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 are called spin-offs. The common smoke detector used in homes was
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 prepared for spacecrafts as a warning system. Computer bar codes in retail stores, shock absorbing shoes used by tennis players and athletes, lightweight materials used for helmets and sporting materials and non stick coating used in pans were all
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 developed as part of
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.
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 technology has provided many benefits to the medical field as well.
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 used to treat cardiac as well as remote monitoring devices for intensive care patients and portable medical equipment carried aboard ambulances are but a few applications of
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 technology providing daily benefits in hospitals, offices and homes. Artificial limbs of lesser weight are
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 a by-product of
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 and these are a blessing for the physically challenged. Not only that, it is well known that global warming will soon transform our Earth into a boiling pot.
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 it would be very essential to find alternative places to live. If we are able to find signs of life elsewhere in
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 it would be a jackpot for mankind. To sum up,
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 exploration and
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 has touched our everyday lives in numerous ways. So, it definitely is a big step for mankind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • monumental significance
  • advancing technology
  • inspiring innovation
  • materials science
  • computer technology
  • satellite communications
  • psychological impact
  • inspirational impact
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics)
  • direct benefits
  • day-to-day life
  • technological advancements
  • immediate application
  • everyday conveniences
  • financial cost
  • space exploration
  • opportunity cost
  • Earth-based issues
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