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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which conatined some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - correct the information in the article -explain wy it is important for the magazine to give correct information -suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Editor: I want to refer to the article "Places to visit in Gulshan Iqbal Town" published in your international travel
magzine
Correct your spelling
magazine
last
 week. I want to clarify that the visiting hours for
Aircraft
Correct article usage
the Aircraft
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 Museum
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 from 11:00AM to 9:00PM on weekdays and from 10:00AM to 08:00PM on weekends. It is important to have the correct information as
this
 museum is of on the top places visited by tourist and locals. The area is surrounded by different restaurants and malls which are mostly dependant on the visitors. Incorrecrt timing can result in a lower turn out of visitors which can impact financially and the town may lose it's glory. I suggest an immediate correction of the work hours to be posted in the next publication.
Moreover
 you can
also
 consult the museum's office to verify the functional hours. Sincerely, Rohan Ahmed
Submitted by rohan.ahmed488 on

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general
Check for typos and spelling errors, such as 'magzine' and 'Incorrecrt', to enhance clarity and professionalism.
coherence
Consider breaking down the sentence starting with 'The area is surrounded...' into two sentences to improve readability.
task achievement
You could elaborate a bit more on the importance of accurate information to provide a more comprehensive argument.
task achievement
You clearly addressed and corrected the incorrect information from the article.
task achievement
Your tone is formal and appropriate for a letter to an editor, which demonstrates good awareness of audience and purpose.
coherence
The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing, which enhances coherence.
coherence
You structured each paragraph around a single main idea, which is effective in maintaining clarity.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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