Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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art

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is a very important component of our lives and for many people it is a way for them to express themselves.Most of the arts scriptures are

repsentative

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of the social issues and living styles of their respective time.It is being argued that government spending on the arts is not justified and these funds could be transferred to more deserving fields.In my opinion, the government backing of

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field is just for a number of reasons. In the colonial and prehistoric times arts and cultures

were

In or at or to what place

where

one of the main sources of entertainment for the ruling elites and they would often spend

large amount

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large amounts

a large amount

of money on arts and sports.

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spending was not in accordance with the state of the rest of the people as many people in those times were poor and hardly had their basic needs fulfilled.

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, pre revolution

france

a republic in western Europe; the largest country wholly in Europe

France

had a very robust

art

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base that catered to

aristocrates

a member of the aristocracy

aristocrats

and resultantly, many poor and impoverished people were living hand to mouth.There is a potential for some communities to become

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art

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an art

centric and they could lag behind in the fields of science and technology, which in turn could weaken them economically. The

art

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is an important medium of expression and for most people it has spiritual significance.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enriching society
promoting cultural understanding
development of talent
creative industries
economic benefits
generate revenue
cultural heritage
identity
prioritize spending
needs of the majority

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