Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
There are inevitable reasons and people often think about them, to have zoos for wild animals and not to have.
This
essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of keeping wild animals in a restricted area.
On the one hand, it's better to keep the cruel animals in zoos and there are potential unavoidable reasons. Firstly
, public safety, considering the latest facts about wild animal attacks on the general public and it has been increasing drastically every year. By keeping wild animals in zoos we can avoid such
attacks and thus
will save human life's which is more precious. Secondly
, by maintaining and providing zoos by government authorities it leads to greater impact on employment. For instance
, the jobs will be like care takers, specialized doctors and other supporting staff. Apart from these above mentioned positives additionally
, we are saving wild animal life and their survival concerns also
by keeping them in zoos. Moreover
, the ratio of killing animals with and without cognizance of animals will also
decrease drastically over a period time.
On the other hand
, most of animal feel
like they are in custody of some other people, if not they usually hunt for their food as their wish. Suggestion
feels
This
was the problem of improper maintenance of zoos. In addition
to that, since these animals are not free to roam as their
willing and ultimately these animals will Suggestion
they're
habituated
to certain specific activities trained by their respective Suggestion
habituate
care takers
and trainers. a custodian who is hired to take care of something (property or a person)
caretakers
Eventhough
, government departments having functionality for zoos, yet people and the researchers Suggestion
Even though
adviced
thathaving the benefit of careful prior consideration or counsel
advised
advice
,
at least these animals need to placed into safari environments by allocating special zones and extra funds to maintain.
To conclude, irrespective of whether the wild animals are kept in zoos with proper maintenance or not, the consequences needs to be Accept space
,
consider
by government and Suggestion
considered
public
as well. In my opinion, at certain levels and for Suggestion
the public
specific group
of Suggestion
a specific group
animals it's
better to keep them in zoos while other animals need to Accept comma addition
animals, it's
taken
care from safari's.Suggestion
take
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