Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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There are inevitable reasons and people often think about them, to have zoos for wild animals and not to have.
This
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essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of keeping wild animals in a restricted area. On the one hand, it's better to keep the cruel animals in zoos and there are potential unavoidable reasons.
Firstly
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, public safety, considering the latest facts about wild animal attacks on the general public and it has been increasing drastically every year. By keeping wild animals in zoos we can avoid
such
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attacks and
thus
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will save human life's which is more precious.
Secondly
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, by maintaining and providing zoos by government authorities it leads to greater impact on employment.
For instance
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, the jobs will be like care takers, specialized doctors and other supporting staff. Apart from these above mentioned positives
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, we are saving wild animal life and their survival concerns
also
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by keeping them in zoos.
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, the ratio of killing animals with and without cognizance of animals will
also
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decrease drastically over a period time.
On the other hand
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, most of animal
feel
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feels
like they are in custody of some other people, if not they usually hunt for their food as their wish.
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was the problem of improper maintenance of zoos.
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to that, since these animals are not free to roam as
their
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they're
willing and ultimately these animals will
habituated
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habituate
to certain specific activities trained by their respective
care takers
a custodian who is hired to take care of something (property or a person)
caretakers
and trainers.
Eventhough
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Even though
, government departments having functionality for zoos, yet people and the researchers
adviced
having the benefit of careful prior consideration or counsel
advised
advice
that
,
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,
at least these animals need to placed into safari environments by allocating special zones and extra funds to maintain. To conclude, irrespective of whether the wild animals are kept in zoos with proper maintenance or not, the consequences needs to be
consider
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considered
by government and
public
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the public
as well. In my opinion, at certain levels and for
specific group
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a specific group
of
animals it's
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animals, it's
better to keep them in zoos while other animals need to
taken
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take
care from safari's.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • captivity
  • natural habitat
  • artificial enclosures
  • genetic diversity
  • animal welfare
  • conservation efforts
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • education platform
  • breeding programs
  • reintroduction
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