Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets no need to go to cinema other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the role of gadgets have been dramatically increased in our daily lives

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People use them for work as well as for entertainment purposes.

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a debate going on whether to enjoy at the fullest one should watch films on these

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a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

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or its rather better to visit

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the theatres

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essay will discuss the merits and demerits of both the views.

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three decades,

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a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

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like mobile, tablets and laptops are making a difference in

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the present era

, Earlier people had to visit physically to

cinema

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on weekends, and it was the

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something regarded with special favor or liking

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time

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to pass

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, now they prefer staying home and snuggling up in their comfortable couches to enjoy their

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movies on their phones. The benefits are considerably more than going to

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cinema

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the cinema

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; one can avoid travelling which is indeed a

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an angry disturbance

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after a long working week,.

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, adjustment of sound, replaying or forwarding of the movie can be done on gadgets only.

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, the preference is being given to

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by some people.

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, some people believe that films are made to be watched in theatres. Many

movies

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movies, for

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, and animated movies like, Frozen are designed with a lot of 3-D and visual effects, which can never be felt and enjoyed on a

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gadget

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their flavour would be felt only on a purpose-based big screens called

cinema

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. It would be ruined or

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become worse or disintegrate

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deteriorated

if watched on small screens of tablets or cell phones. To sum up, people have been divided due to different

priorities whether

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priorities, whether

to go to

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cinema

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the cinema

or to make the most of

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, I personally believe that visiting theatre has far

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more impact

and one can make his mind relaxed by doing

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. As

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a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

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can not justify with visuals and sound effects properly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

307 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
Preservation
Filmmaking art
Cinematographic nuances

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Fully explain your ideas

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Task 2: Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.