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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development.

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It is true that pupils mostly spent their
time
 on
computer
 games while they
fouced
being in focus or brought into focus
focused
 on physical sports. In
this
eassay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 I will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discus
causes
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the causes
 and it
this
 development good or not for children. There are many reasons why children
not like
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aren't liking
 sport rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
computer
 games.
Firstly
, in
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
 era child depend on technology they like only play
computer
 games
.
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.
Moreso
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, in these days parents don't proper
fouces
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
 on
their
in or at that place
there
 because of
busy schedule
Suggestion
a busy schedule
. Most of
time
 spent by children in school and tuition because in
this
 is competition era every student
get
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gets
first
 rank. When they
are
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are, then they
are then they
then
then
 they spent their spare
time
 on
computer
 games and rejuvenate their mind.
On the other hand
 it is
nagative development
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a negative development
negative development
 because if
adolescents
Suggestion
the adolescents
 spent their
time
 on
computer
 games
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 they could
faced
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face
 many problems related to their health like, obesity, eyes weakness and many more. After that they don't part in physical games and like loneliness. Children become aggressive if they play PC games and they do not like
spent
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spending
 their leisure
time
 with grandparents as well as no give respect them
.
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.
 Overall, if children spent their
time
 playing
computer
 games
then
 they faced
alo
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a lot
t of problems and it is the responsibility of
parents the
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parents, they
y should proper care of their children and encourage them for physical sports

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