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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Being a good member
to
Suggestion
of
 societies means that an individual respects to other people and obeys rules. Some people think that parents are the custodian who has all the responsibilities to educate their own children because school is where children acquire academic knowledge.
However
, in my opinion, both parents and teachers play an important role in a child's education. From the birth to the school begins, parents are the primary source that children learn from. During
this
 time period, children will develop their personalities by imitating their parents' behaviours.
Therefore
, parents are responsible to demonstrate proper manners at home.
In addition
, parents should guide their children what they are expected to behave in the world.
For example
, we should never steal from others because
this
 is unacceptable and immoral practice in any of societies, and we need to turn the volume down in public and to be polite when talking to someone. Not only parents, teachers at school
also
 have
influences
Suggestion
an influence
influence
 on children. School is a microcosm of a big community where children start being socialized and establishing their interpersonal skills. At schools, kids will understand some social norms.
For instance
, a child will be taught to be punctual and arrive to
classes
Suggestion
class
 on time, which will make them value other people's time even when they grown up.
Moreover
, through working with peers from a
verity
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
 of backgrounds, children will learn to be empathic and know how to contribute. These are something that a child cannot really learn at home. To conclude, in order to educate children to be a valuable member
to
Suggestion
of
 society, both parents and teachers have an indispensable role in shaping the character of children.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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