Many working people get little or no exercise either the working day or in their free time, and have problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
As well said by someone 'Health is wealth'. Healthy body improves the work ability as well as
provides
a long Suggestion
provided
providing
health
life. Lake of regular exercise invites many deadly diseases. There are several reasons behind working people can not Suggestion
healthy
doing
exercise. Suggestion
do
However
, it has many solutions also
. Both the reasons
and relative solutions will justify in ensuring paragraphs.
Among the various causes, the foremost a native or inhabitant of Russia
Russians
one
is, due to hactic
schedule and buy life, working marked by intense agitation or emotion
hectic
person
can not allocate time
to
the workout. The Suggestion
for
one
third
of the day time
individual passing
in the office. The remaining (photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
posing
time
, one
spend
with the family and children. Suggestion
spends
Moreover
, people are less interested in lifting a heavy weight or run for the long distance. Each person
have
various Suggestion
has
personality
and nature. Suggestion
personalities
For instance
, some like to do regular walking or running at
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in
early morning whereas
some like to enjoy the bed.
To get the rid Suggestion
the early morning, whereas
the early morning whereas
from
the causes there are several solutions Suggestion
of
also
available. The foremost one
is, implementation of health policy in company's regulation
which have majorly table-chair job. Employee have to sit for more than 9 hours in the office due to their work position. If Suggestion
the company's regulation
company
Suggestion
the company
apply
the Suggestion
applies
mandetory
exercise break of 10 required by rule
mandatory
minutes
Accept comma addition
minutes, then
then
candidate
can get a chance to take Suggestion
a candidate
the candidate
rest
from constant looking in front of Suggestion
a rest
computer screen
. Suggestion
a computer screen
the computer screen
computer screens
As a result
person
can take care of the eyes and improves the vison
. a vivid mental image
vision
Furthermore
, improvement in public gardens and gyms encourage people to go there. Government
provides these kind of facilities at no cost. Suggestion
The government
As a result
, development of public property attract
the citizen to go there.
All in all, based on the Suggestion
attracts
person
choice they like to Suggestion
person's
pritent
and do not want to give make believe with the intent to deceive
pretend
time
for their body and have to face the health issues like obesity. But, implementing some rules in corporate and by the help of goverment
development it the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
can be reduce
.Suggestion
can reduce
can be reduced
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