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Many working people get little or no exercise either the working day or in their free time, and have problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time
As well said by someone 'Health is wealth'. Healthy body improves the work ability as well as
provides
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provided
providing
 a long
health
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healthy
 life. Lake of regular exercise invites many deadly diseases. There are several reasons behind working people can not
doing
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do
 exercise.
However
, it has many solutions
also
. Both the
reasons
a native or inhabitant of Russia
Russians
 and relative solutions will justify in ensuring paragraphs. Among the various causes, the foremost
one
 is, due to
hactic
marked by intense agitation or emotion
hectic
 schedule and buy life, working
person
 can not allocate
time
to
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for
 the workout. The
one
third
 of the day
time
 individual
passing
(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
posing
 in the office. The remaining
time
,
one
spend
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spends
 with the family and children.
Moreover
, people are less interested in lifting a heavy weight or run for the long distance. Each
person
have
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has
 various
personality
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personalities
 and nature.
For instance
, some like to do regular walking or running
at
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in
early morning whereas
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the early morning, whereas
the early morning whereas
 some like to enjoy the bed. To get the rid
from
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of
 the causes there are several solutions
also
 available. The foremost
one
 is, implementation of health policy in
company's regulation
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the company's regulation
 which have majorly table-chair job. Employee have to sit for more than 9 hours in the office due to their work position. If
company
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the company
apply
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applies
 the
mandetory
required by rule
mandatory
 exercise break of 10
minutes
Accept comma addition
minutes, then
then
candidate
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a candidate
the candidate
 can get a chance to take
rest
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a rest
 from constant looking in front of
computer screen
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a computer screen
the computer screen
computer screens
.
As a result
person
 can take care of the eyes and improves the
vison
a vivid mental image
vision
.
Furthermore
, improvement in public gardens and gyms encourage people to go there.
Government
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The government
 provides these kind of facilities at no cost.
As a result
, development of public property
attract
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attracts
 the citizen to go there. All in all, based on the
person
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person's
 choice they like to
pritent
make believe with the intent to deceive
pretend
 and do not want to give
time
 for their body and have to face the health issues like obesity. But, implementing some rules in corporate and by the help of
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 development it
can be reduce
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can reduce
can be reduced
.
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