Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Teaching children how to be productive members in
society
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has always been an important topic to tackle.
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, is it the main responsibility of the parents or the
school
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? In my opinion, it is primarily the responsibility of the parents, but
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the
school
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should contribute to support the parents' behaviour.
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, children
spend
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spends
most of their time with their parents and they learn every aspect of life from them.
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, they learn to eat, dress and talk just by watching their parents and mimicking them.
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, parents could be good members in
society
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themselves and the children would learn that automatically.
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, parents have the highest impact on their children, especially in young age. A
child
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would do everything to see his parents proud of him.
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, whenever a
child
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contributes to the
society
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in a good way, even if it is very small, the look of contentment and pride his parents give him would encourage him to do more.
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, children get to know their
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community other than their parents in schools. They learn several new things and they start to develop new friendships and social interactions. Here comes the role of the
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, where they need to support the parents' views or the children will have an unstable personality.
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, if the parents' instructed their children to throw garbage in the bin, and the
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allowed them to throw it on the floor, the consequences of
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contradictory act would make the
child
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not know what is correct and what is not.
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,
school
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would teach the
child
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new things not encountered at home, so it basically complements the parent's actions. In conclusion, opinions differed about the main responsibility holder to bring up children to be
good members in
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members in good
society
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. In my opinion, both parents and schools contribute in
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procedure and
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they both have to be on the same page.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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