Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #sport #competitions #troubles

Holding sports competition is thought

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to be

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

troublesome by some

people

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people, however

however

others believe the excitement it generates is worth going through the trouble. I think sports has always been an integral part of humans ever since

Olympics

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the Olympics

and in

this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

will discuss both the sides of the argument. Competitive sports generate a lot of interest and publicity nowadays and it is viewed as an opportunity to showcase what people are capable of in the field of athletics and sports.

For instance

, holding

National level cricket competition

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a National level cricket competition

in India attract fans from all over the world.

Such

competitions

have showed

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have shown

the world the top level India stands in the game of cricket and it brings together people with same interest

also

leading to income in revenue from tourism.

Also

, the players get to compete in world championship level and make our country proud. According to some people, holding

such

events often creates a lot of trouble and think

such

events should be discontinued. Many a times we see

rivalry

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the rivalry

between the

competitive

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competing

teams often lead to escalated fights and causes injuries to many people.

Also

, the arrangement takes up a lot of time, money and efforts

to run

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run

it smoothly and

this

leads to people thinking it is not worth the trouble. Even if

this

achie ved

to gain with effort

achieved

lots of people attending

sport

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sporting

competitions leave a trail of litter which the management has to pay to clear it out. To conclude,

refers to the speaker or writer

believe sports are essential part of our lives and having competitions help to bring out the best in people. It is

chance

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a chance

the chance

for players to show what they got and a chance

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for

viewers to cheer and experience the thrill of sports.

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