Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Needless to say,

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is a vital part of human’s life.

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, it is debatable whether it should be sponsored by governments. Since I believe that humankind’s needs necessitate presence of

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in daily life, I totally disagree with the

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. Some reasons led funding arts by governments to be regarded as money wastage, particularly when there are so many other demands on it.

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and foremost, governments need to allocate large sums of their budget to finance

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industry and it seems to be wrong, since most of the countries possess limited fiscal resources. Another point is that there are many rich people who

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to an exceedingly great extent or degree

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take pleasure in funding

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shows and galleries and they could be an

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suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc

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surrogate for

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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

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is that other factors of well-being

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as housing, healthcare and safety are seemingly more important rather than functions of

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expressions including aesthetic,

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(physiology) the gradual lengthening of inactive muscle or muscle fibers

relaxation

and motivation. Notwithstanding all above reasons,

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is still

worthile

having worth or merit or value; being honorable or admirable

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to be funded by governments. Artistic works comprise painting, music, sculpture and

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. Which all can provide an uplift after a stressful working day. Not only does

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enrich lives of individuals, but it could be regarded as a revenue source for people and governments. Beside all

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related companies which employ many artists every year, museums and

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galleries play a principal role in most famous

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tourist

destination countries. Every year, The Pizza tower in Italy

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a crowd of over 1 million visitors and

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would be an excellent example that illustrates how much

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is important to

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the tourism industry

. Viewed as a whole, I believe that not only is not dedicating taxes to

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worthless but

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worthless, but

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governments should make more efforts to bring crafts of artists into

citizens’ daily life

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the citizens’ daily life

and

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is

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to an exceedingly great extent or degree

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beneficial from the point of view of economy and sociology.