Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Needless to say,

Art

is a vital part of human life.

Nonetheless

, it is debatable whether it should be sponsored by governments. Since I believe that humankind’s needs necessitate the presence of

art

in daily life, I totally disagree with the

provided statement

Suggestion

statement provided

. Some reasons led funding arts by governments to be regarded as money wastage, particularly when there are so many other demands on it.

First

and foremost, governments need to allocate large sums of their budget to finance the

art

industry and it seems to be wrong since most of the countries possess limited fiscal resources. Another point is that there are many rich people who immensely take pleasure in funding

art

shows and galleries and they could be an appropriate surrogate for the government.

Third point

Suggestion

The third point

is that other factors of well-being

such

as housing, healthcare, and safety are seemingly more important rather than functions of

art

expressions including aesthetic, relaxation and motivation. Notwithstanding all the above reasons,

art

is still worthwhile to be funded by governments. Artistic works comprise painting, music, sculpture, and etc. Which all can provide an uplift after a stressful working day. Not only does

art

enrich the lives of individuals, but it could be regarded as a revenue source for people and governments. Beside all

art

-related companies which employ many artists every year, museums and

art

galleries play a principal role in most famous tourist destination countries. Every year, The Pizza tower in Italy attracts a crowd of over 1 million visitors and

this

would be an excellent example that illustrates how much

art

is important to the tourism industry. Viewed as a whole, I believe that not only is not dedicating taxes to

art

worthless but

Accept comma addition

worthless, but

also

governments should make more efforts to bring crafts of artists into

citizens’ daily life

Suggestion

the citizens’ daily life

and

this

is immensely beneficial from the point of view of economy and sociology.