Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern society, laboratory test on
animals
is a common Use synonyms
way
of ensuring the safety of a new medicine or medical procedure and most people have formed Use synonyms
this
conception that it is acceptable that Linking Words
animals
are tested on for medical purpose. Use synonyms
However
, whether it is legal is different from whether it is ethical, especially when we see it not from our human perspective. Linking Words
Obviously
people who support Add a comma
Obviously,
this
practice put more value on human Linking Words
life
than Use synonyms
Use synonyms
animals
’ and they believe that Change preposition
on animals
animals
should be sacrificed for the Use synonyms
benefits
of Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
human
Correct article usage
the human
races
. To maximize the health and safety of mankind, Fix the agreement mistake
race
animal
test is the best Add an article
the animal
an animal
way
to get Use synonyms
the
accurate and reliable data for a particular medicine or procedure because Correct article usage
apply
animals
have similar biological Use synonyms
characters
and structures. Conducting experiments on Replace the word
characteristics
animals
before launching a new therapy is Use synonyms
also
a responsible practice Linking Words
to
patients who deserve every respect Change preposition
for
to
their Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
However
, it is equally reasonable to say that Linking Words
animals
have their intrinsic right to Use synonyms
life
. In other words, Use synonyms
animals
and humans have totally the same rights to live on the earth and Use synonyms
therefore
no one should take the Linking Words
life
of the other for any purpose. Animal protectors Use synonyms
also
raise the evidence that laboratory rats have nerve Linking Words
system
which means that they can feel pain. Fix the agreement mistake
systems
That is
why many opponents of animal testation suggest computer simulation, hoping to replace the cruel Linking Words
way
of experimentation with Use synonyms
machine
. To summarize Fix the agreement mistake
machines
this
essay, Linking Words
while
I believe Linking Words
animals
should be respected under every circumstance, I have to admit that there is no better Use synonyms
way
than medical testation on Use synonyms
animals
to secure patients against Use synonyms
potential
dangerous effects. Reconciliation is hard to achieve, but Change the word
potentially
suggestion
can be to control the number of Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
animals
tested Use synonyms
on
in Change preposition
apply
laboratory
and reduce the pain that they may endure during the experiments.Correct article usage
the laboratory
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite