Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank them for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you

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Hi Peter and Sansa, I’m writing to let you know that I’ve just received a courier package from the photo album. I appreciate your efforts and thank you so much for

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a remarkable holiday. I spent a good time with all of you. Canada is a beautiful country with snowy mountains, dense forests, and spectacular wildlife. I always remember

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scuba diving on Edinburgh beach. I was delighted by your friendly nature. For a month, I was quite busy with my current project work and

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to contact you. I’m very sorry about

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thing. Apart from the busy office schedule, I fall sick and had a severe cold.

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forced me to take a few days off from work. I’d like to invite both of you to visit Portugal. My wife and I plan to celebrate our 20 th marriage anniversary

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occasion. Portugal is a nice place and they’re several places which attract tourist. I’m sure you will enjoy your time in Portugal. I’d like to see both of you. Take care and be safe. Kind regards, Tom

Sun Sep 01 2019

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