Some people think that nations and individuals should focus on their problems because it is unable to help everyone in the world since there are so many in needs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #nations #individuals #focus #world

It looks so selfish that

society

and each person give concentration on their own issues, because on

this

earth, all the countries and its citizens have already myriads of problems nations and people. I

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holistically, disagree with

this

point of view due to some logical reasons.

To begin

with, the individual is dependent on other people

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so does the nation. For

this

salient feature of a person, human beings are known as the best creature of the world

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If a man will not help other men, nothing fruitful would outcome for the nation.

For example

, if one country does not give hand to another country, it will be impossible to survive in

this

complicated world.

This

is because, when a country like the USA

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is producing corn and rice profusely whereas Canada has a huge production of grain crops like barely

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oats which are the ultimate need of the USA. If Canada does not give these grains to the USA, the people of the USA would be in trouble and vice-versa. I

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personally, do not think that there is any detrimental effect in helping someone.

Similarly

, the human being lives on the planet, Earth. The human makes the

society

and humanity succours each person to live in the community by heading up. If humanity had died, no one would have survived in

this

world.

For instance

, individuals encourage other people who are afraid to do exceptional which could invariably, help to build developed

society

, and

this

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eventually, leads to become a great nation.

Moreover

, showing humane quality neither irritating nor boasting

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but helping the other creatures of God.

Therefore

, if we solve other problems, despite having many problems individually,

then

the whole problem will be solved in the long run. In conclusion, there are plenty of essential things that people need in

this

civilization. It does not mean that people will not deal with those problems

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since they are themselves on a big issue. I would say that all the people and

society

come forward to tackle all the problems.

Mon Sep 02 2019

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