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Despite the existence of legal institutions such as courts to resolve differences between people, some people still think that it is better to settle for cases out of courts. To what extent so you agree ?

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Even Though
court
 rooms still
exists
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exist
, some people prefer solving their differences out of it. I believe
some the reason why
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the reason why some
people people
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 choose to settle their problems out of
court
 rooms include expensive legal fee paid to lawyers, lengthy
time
 period to get the final
verdict
, complicated paperwork and police investigation. In as much as
court
 rooms
are establish
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are established
 to solve the differences between individuals, the legal fee for lawyers is expensive and people prefer to settle their differences without the use of
courts
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the courts
 so as to avoid
such
 costs.
Base
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The base
on
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of
 my knowledge, to hire a lawyer for land dispute between villagers, the cost is times two as compare when the
this
 could be
resolve
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resolved
 by the village leader.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, the
time
 frame to get the final
verdict
 of
court
 cases is
some
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
sometime
time
 lengthy and people don't have the patience to wait for the final decision by the
court
 so prefer to solve their differences out of
court
.
For instance
 the jury May take too long to sit and get the
verdict
 of a
court
case but
Accept comma addition
case, but
 if the disputes
was not taken
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were not taken
 to
court
, the
verdict
 won't take long to be out and for it to be implemented.
Also
 complicated paperwork and police investigations makes it difficult for people to solve their differences in the
court room
a room in which a lawcourt sits
courtroom
 and so may choose doing it out of the
court
. To conclude, I strongly agree that people should solve their differences out if the
court
 rooms because of high lawyer fee, lengthy
time
 period for
verdict
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the verdict
a verdict
, complicated paperwork and police investigation.

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  • conciliation
  • mediation
  • arbitration
  • litigation
  • adjudication
  • settlement
  • amicable resolution
  • compromise agreement
  • alternative dispute resolution
  • confidentiality
  • legal fees
  • binding decision
  • negotiation
  • legal precedence
  • equitable
  • litigants
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