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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
Life
 is all about ups and Downs. Some people face to many problematic conditions like
unsatisfactory job
Suggestion
an unsatisfactory job
 or shortage of
money
. People's have different ways of dealing with it, some just tend to accept the worst
situation
 and persist with it. While, others believe in fighting back and trying in progressing
such
 disappointing
situation
. Personally, I completely agree with
second view
Suggestion
the second view
. On the one hand, it sounds good in saying to improve awful things,
however
, evolving is not easy. Person have to embed every single
things
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thing
 of
life
. Living
life
 is gratified by emotional and physical needs.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
basic physical needs are fulfilled by
money
, we should have
money
 to buy things for
ourself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
 or our family. The peoples who accept the unsatisfactory works all for
money
, we have to continue with it because basic needs are gained by paying bills. Despite of the fact that we aren't pleased with work environment or we aren't rewarded with good payment according to our qualifications, experiences and
hardworks
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hard works
.
On the other hand
, taking best attempts to conquer worse
situation
 is
reliable wat
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a reliable way
reliable way
 to deal with
obstacles
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the obstacles
 of
life
 and it would reward you
with great career
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with a great career
.
For instance
, in my
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
, there was a student who was born in a poor family, his parents were farmers and did not have enough
money
 to pay for fees if he had gone to the university. It was admirable that he
try
Suggestion
tries
 his best in study and gained the scholarship of his
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 university and became an official student. After that, by his efforts every day, when he graduated, he became a professional doctor as he desired and has earned a lot of
money
 per month. Thence, he and his parents have had a
more wonderful
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most wonderful
life
 with adequate convenience.
Thus
,
the more harder
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the harder
 you try, the more success you gain. All in all, perception varies from person to person so, ways to tackle
situation
also
 totally depend
in
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on
 individuals believes. Each of them might bring both physical and mental benefits for people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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