Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: • ask questions about the trip • tell them why you want to join the group • explain how you can help.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a mother of Shahil Sultan, who is a student of class 4 in your school, and writing to you regarding the
trip
to Kolkata from the school. I and my husband are exceedingly interested to join the
trip
with my son.
Although
I got an email related to the field tour, I need some
detail
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detailed
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information about the
trip
. I want to know about the program schedule of 3 days, accommodation facilities and the cost of the whole visit. Please inform me of the payment procedure so that I can manage everything in due time. As we do not spend enough time with our son due to our hectic lifestyle,
this
tour will allow us to enjoy quality time with him.
Moreover
, parents will
also
create a strong bonding with the teachers as well as other families. Because I am working in a travel and tour company, I can manage cheaper tickets for the whole group. I can use my employee code to get a discount in any hotel
also
. Looking forward to hearing from you more about the
trip
and thank you for the excellent initiative. Best regards,
Shawlin
Correct your spelling
Shaolin
Rishad
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