Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: • ask questions about the trip • tell them why you want to join the group • explain how you can help.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a mother of Shahil Sultan, who is a student of class 4 in your school, and writing to you regarding the

trip

to Kolkata from the school. I and my husband are exceedingly interested to join the

trip

with my son.

Although

I got an email related to the field tour, I need some

detail

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detailed

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information about the

trip

. I want to know about the program schedule of 3 days, accommodation facilities and the cost of the whole visit. Please inform me of the payment procedure so that I can manage everything in due time. As we do not spend enough time with our son due to our hectic lifestyle,

this

tour will allow us to enjoy quality time with him.

Moreover

, parents will

also

create a strong bonding with the teachers as well as other families. Because I am working in a travel and tour company, I can manage cheaper tickets for the whole group. I can use my employee code to get a discount in any hotel

also

. Looking forward to hearing from you more about the

trip

and thank you for the excellent initiative. Best regards,

Shawlin

Correct your spelling

Shaolin

Rishad

Submitted by shawlin90 on Mon Sep 02 2019

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

197 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: • ask questions about the trip • tell them why you want to join the group • explain how you can help.

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