A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Susan, I’m writing to you to say thank you for agreeing to look after my house & pet while I’m on my holiday. I’m very grateful for your help as it means a lot to me. I’ll be going out for

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vacation from 1st September to 5th September, 19. I’ve mentioned my contact number & other emergency numbers on the sticky note on the fridge. You are free to call me anytime, in case my number is not reachable you can try the other numbers mentioned below it. I’ve kept my dog’s food in the top right corner drawer of the kitchen. You need to feed him twice a day in his

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, you need to water the plants once in the morning & keep the daily newspapers inside on my study desk. I hope my dog won’t trouble you much and you’ll enjoy his company till I come. Take care see you soon. Thank You Yours Truly Vaishali

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in a man-made environment should no longer exist in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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