All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

The modern society has been facing eating disorders. The increasing number of obese people is alarming in many countries across the World.
This
essay is going to explain what are the drivers and outcomes of
this
health crisis. The enormous consumption of junk food and the lack of exercises are the major causes of the obesity growth among populations all over the world.
For example
, a recent study shows that 80% of the working population in The USA eat fast food at lunch
time
because it is more convenient as it is cheaper than healthy meals and they do not have much
time
to spend cooking at home.
Therefore
, taking a break for 20 minutes per day to do physical activities
such
as running, jogging or cycling can be challenging for the vast majority of people. Since they have a fast-paced lifestyle either at work or university which deprives them of having
time
to practice some sports. As we can see, unhealthy diet and the absence of exercises are the main causes of the rise in the number of overweight people. The consequences of these activities are many.
However
, the most
conserning
with regard or relation to
concerning
are heart disorders caused by the presence of fat in the blood streams and low self-
steem
water at boiling temperature diffused in the atmosphere
steam
stream
esteem
generated by the overweight
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
.
For instance
, both illnesses can lead people to die, the
fomer
referring to the first of two things or persons mentioned (or the earlier one or ones of several)
former
farmer
gamer
through a heart attack and the latter through depression and other
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
disorders.
Thus
, individuals and government should be aware and act on
this
health
problems
Suggestion
problem
. In conclusion, the unhealthy eating habits and the lack of
time
to do sports are the key factors driving obesity, nowadays.
As a result
, the number of people passing away due to illnesses related to their diets and lifestyle is growing drastically. Authorities should legislate in order to protect citizens from
this
treat by making campaigns to raise awareness on
this
issue and creating conditions to improve their wellness.
Submitted by Layana on

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