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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

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The modern society has been facing eating disorders. The increasing number of obese people is alarming in many countries across the World.
This
 essay is going to explain what are the drivers and outcomes of
this
 health crisis. The enormous consumption of junk food and the lack of exercises are the major causes of the obesity growth among populations all over the world.
For example
, a recent study shows that 80% of the working population in The USA eat fast food at lunch
time
 because it is more convenient as it is cheaper than healthy meals and they do not have much
time
 to spend cooking at home.
Therefore
, taking a break for 20 minutes per day to do physical activities
such
 as running, jogging or cycling can be challenging for the vast majority of people. Since they have a fast-paced lifestyle either at work or university which deprives them of having
time
 to practice some sports. As we can see, unhealthy diet and the absence of exercises are the main causes of the rise in the number of overweight people. The consequences of these activities are many.
However
, the most
conserning
with regard or relation to
concerning
 are heart disorders caused by the presence of fat in the blood streams and low self-
steem
water at boiling temperature diffused in the atmosphere
steam
stream
esteem
 generated by the overweight
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
.
For instance
, both illnesses can lead people to die, the
fomer
referring to the first of two things or persons mentioned (or the earlier one or ones of several)
former
farmer
gamer
 through a heart attack and the latter through depression and other
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
 disorders.
Thus
, individuals and government should be aware and act on
this
 health
problems
Suggestion
problem
. In conclusion, the unhealthy eating habits and the lack of
time
 to do sports are the key factors driving obesity, nowadays.
As a result
, the number of people passing away due to illnesses related to their diets and lifestyle is growing drastically. Authorities should legislate in order to protect citizens from
this
 treat by making campaigns to raise awareness on
this
 issue and creating conditions to improve their wellness.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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