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The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

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There are various different opinions on the subject of the
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While
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 some people might suggest that it has negatively affected our lives and society, I personally believe that it has actually made the world a much better place. In my opinion, there are two main benefits to
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 technology.
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, I am sure most people would agree that the
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 has improved the way we communicate.
Although
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 spending too much time using the
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instead
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 of talking to real people can cause social isolation, most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and
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 chat programs like MSN Messenger.
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 useful and powerful communication tools have made it much faster, easier and cheaper to keep in touch with family and friends in other countries (and
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 to do international business).
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 to
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, the
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 provides us with all of the
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 in the world at work, school and home. In the past, research involved spending many hours in the library. Now,
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, the same
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 is available online. Of course, not all of the material on the
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 is offensive and some of it is dangerous – there is everything from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.
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, I feel that
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 free movement and sharing of
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 has generally been beneficial.
To conclude
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, I once again restate my view that the
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 has had a positive influence on modern life because of its effects on both communication and the flow of
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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