“Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

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rates would surge in the absence of the death sentence.

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, plays a vital role in deterring

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. I strongly disagree with

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largely justifiable that the death penalty is an appropriate method to control

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. Advocates of

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view argue that people would be less inclined to commit a serious

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if they

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they might be executed.

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thinking is flawed as scientists agree that

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punishment has no deterrent

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effect

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, Vietnam is one of the countries where

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is applied, yet the murder rate in

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country is still high.

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the GSO, there have been over 1,000 murder cases reported since

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year.

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number proves that homicides still occur even when killers know that they might be sentenced to death.

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is not a holistic approach to vicious

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. In lieu of capital punishment, I think that superior alternatives could be adopted. One could be that states could spend more on education and training.

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and deter juvenile delinquency, as most murders happening around young people are because of a

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of passion. Another is to imprison serious criminals for life without parole. Not only would

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be a more humane measure

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it

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them from

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reoffending

. In conclusion,

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we could prevent heinous

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by applying capital punishment, I believe that there are superior alternatives to deter it

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heartless method.